Monday, 22 June 2020

Cuz ending

In class our task for writing is to write how we think the ending of cuz is going to turn out like. I found it hard to write it so it would be long. I found it easy to set the scene.

Cuz ending



“Cuz we need to have a rest just for a tiny bit. C’mon cuz. we are in milford sound and i am exhausted and you know you are to.” 
“Fine but just for a little bit.” River Groaned.
“Hey cuz, what’s that over there.” Huia questioned.
“It looks like a tree.” River acknowledged. “Its humongous, brown and shaped weirdly.”
“’Hey cuz Let’s go closer and see what it is”
minute after minute, step after step, breath after breath. closer and closer, they got much closer to it. then it didn’t look that much like a tree it looked like a hayzel cabin.
“Hey cuz should we go in the cabin.” Huia mentioned.
“Well cuz what are we standing around for then, yes cuz! Replied river. So they trentched into the cabin and in the cabin, was some one they recognized it was, Toe, at first they didn’t recognize him but then when they recognized him they felt so relieved and gleefully thrilled that Toe was alive. He informed them about everything that had happened. There were some men camping so they went fishing and while they were fishing they saw me floating in my soggy clothes so they brought me into there cabin and that’s how i got here.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora. I am Billy from St Mary’s School.
    I really like your ending for cuz.
    Why did you highlight your title?
    I like how your story is very interesting it really helps your story.
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    Mā te wā
    Billy

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