Monday, 29 June 2020

Teeth

In class we have been learning to describe in our writing. I found it easy to do the first half. I found it hard to add more to my writing. Wind softly blew against the trees, rocking an unstable wooden boat. Two men fishing, gripping onto fishing rods that were softly touching the glistening calm flowing water, surrounded by the wonky mountains covering the peaceful land covered in faded colourless fog. Swoosh. Splash. Fish advancing with their shiny scales. Sploosh.

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