Sunday, 13 October 2019

Recount Writing

Our learning intention this week was to paint a picture in the reader's mind by describing.
Freezing cold morning, shivering like an iceberg. 3, 2, 1 the sun started rising then we started our match. One minute 1-0 two minutes 2-1 in the first three minutes it was 3-2. Here he comes! Sprinting down the line trying to get him fall over the ball, I stabbed my foot in front of the ball so he fell over. Didn't ́work. I kicked it out. Finally it was half time. I had a rest. I asked my friend what the score was in his game. He said it was 2-1 then I replied our score was 5-4. Our second match. He took a shot. Luca dived and pushed it out then it was a corner kick. He smashed the ball. It started curving. Kayden ran to the front post. Kayden thought it was the other teams goal so he headed it. Luca dived to save it then he got there too late. The ball got in the back of the net. It was an own goal but still a goal. 6, 5, 4 the sun started going down.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Johnny,
    It sounds like you have been playing a lot of football lately. Was this match before or after your other blog? Remember you can schedule the date for blog posts so they go in order.
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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